For manukau's assembly,we had to do metaphors and I was a person to share it so I decided to share it with the school and post it onto my blog ,and here it is!
Hi Ama my name is Jia. I really likes how you said you are a fur seal diving through the deeps because it is true cause I have seen you, you are really fast. It reminded of my metaphor blog. What else do you think you are? If you want to check out my blog go to http://wpsjiam.blogspot.co.nz.
Hey Ama, my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary. I really like this post, especially the metaphor, you made it made it related to animals. This reminds about writing narratives. Maybe you could have wrote more information, maybe you could explain What are metaphors?. But everything else you did was awesome.
Hi Ama my name is Jia. I really likes how you said you are a fur seal diving through the deeps because it is true cause I have seen you, you are really fast. It reminded of my metaphor blog. What else do you think you are? If you want to check out my blog go to http://wpsjiam.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHey Ama, my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary. I really like this post, especially the metaphor, you made it made it related to animals. This reminds about writing narratives. Maybe you could have wrote more information, maybe you could explain What are metaphors?. But everything else you did was awesome.
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